Milan

WALT = write an explanation piece on how rocket shoes work.
= Rocket Shoes =

I have invented rocket shoes so I don't have to wait in line's and in traffic.

Each shoe has 3 humongous rockets on the bottom and 2 little ones on the back. There are chains on the side that you pull up and it turns them on.

The shoes are solar powered so you leave them in the sun and they will charge and then they will last for a week.

My shoes can make you run fast really fast. You can jump over buildings and they will not run out of power unless it rains.

The rockets shoes are really handy for the kids and elderly because you don't have to cross the road and it saves power and energy.

//__** Walt = write a descriptive piece of writing about a tornado. **__//

= The Powerful Tornado = I was driving down the main highway on my way to school. Suddenly I saw rain drops on my windscreen and that's when I looked up and saw a humongous powerful tornado forming.

It looks like a big black monster coming towards me wreaking everything in it's path. Bang, crash, screech the powerful tornado is whirling it's way closer and closer. Arrr arrr the tornado has reached me and its picking me up " someone help me help me" but no-one could help me WOOSH and the tornado has got me arrr i cant help but to think how my life is going to end.